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Thursday, 30 March 2017

My Snot Writing

This week in writing we are learning to show not tell, we had to use adjectives and alliteration.  First we played and touched the snot. As a class we brain stormed the wow words, I used this to write my snot writing.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Angus I really like the way you put how its words were correct I think you should next time put how it smelt great job Angus.

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  2. I mean how you felt

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