This week in writing we are learning to show not tell, we had to use adjectives and alliteration. First we played and touched the snot. As a class we brain stormed the wow words, I used this to write my snot writing.
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Hi Angus I really like the way you put how its words were correct I think you should next time put how it smelt great job Angus.
ReplyDeleteI mean how you felt
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